Plastic surgery The causes and effects of plastic surgery Thesis Statement In the past, people apply plastic surgery mainly for removing their scar or restore their damaged body parts which are formed after serious accident. But now, the purpose of most of them has been changed. However the effects of the surgery can be various.BODY Topic Sentence 1: the pressure that society brings to all ages to become “ideal” arson Specific Supporting Evidence: (a) Media (b) society pushes thoughts in their heads that to be recognized they have to be good looking (c) Many celebrities have apply plastic surgery Topic Sentence 2: Undoubtedly, having a good appearance does boost one’s confidence. Specific Supporting Evidence: (a) A new look for burnt victims, or people in serious car crash can help them to enter the society again (b) Prevent discrimination.
) Enhance people self-esteem Topic Sentence 3: Nevertheless, the potential risks of applying plastic surgery are harmful to our body. Specific Supporting Evidence: (a) Suffer from depression as the final result of the surgery may differ from their expected result. (b) Inflammation may occur around the wound. (c) Side effects, even die. Topic Sentence 1 : the pressure that society brings to all ages to become “ideal”